by Elise Jan 27, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
This will be |
by ?
Hey, this is really good, its sad and expressive, keep it up, I like all the poems I've read so I think I'll add you to my fav. list xxx |
by !*!Zoe!*!
Oh, sweetie, this is a beautiful poem, it's so sad too. It brought tears to my eyes. I don't tihnk your writing in getting worse! |
its good, your just trying too hard to rhyme, you dont need to rhyme. its a sad topic. keep up the writing, i love it all |