by Heather M Craig Jan 27, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Drinking And Drugs Was Getting Heavy, |
Great, awesome, speechless, 5/5 |
by Andrea
wow! amazing poem!!! |
by Broken
i always find it good to use the last line of your poem as your title..."he wasn't the only one to die"...or u could just shorten it down a little and make it "the only one to die"...hhmm..well, i hope i helped... |
omg... soo sad, yet really good. loved it. |
by Tamara
I like this poem alot, it has a strong feeling to it. I cant say i can relate to it but its a good'n! Keep it up. your a great writer |