omg... soo sad, yet really good. loved it.
Fighter
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i always find it good to use the last line of your poem as your title..."he wasn't the only one to die"...or u could just shorten it down a little and make it "the only one to die"...hhmm..well, i hope i helped...

wow! amazing poem!!!

Great, awesome, speechless, 5/5