Wow, that was so utterly amazing....Loved it.....5/5.....It completely relate to that poem, it is exactly how I feel.....Amazing.....Keep it up (writing I mean)

Kalika

i thought that the poem was a lot better then other suicidal poems written. it showed more emotion then most and described things so i understood. i like that the title was "the game" because it made it unique. keep rockin poems
-iyke

i loved it laura.