Great poem, I can really relate to it, keep up he great work.

hey this is great
you are really good at expressing what you feel.
that is a good thing.
much love
brittany

wow. that's really good.

I have been reading your poems and putting it all together and just want to say how great it is ur raising ur friends son. U have gone through so much and express it soo great through your poems. They are really good, take care.

Great poem!! Keep it up and take care.

great poem i can really relate to this well done keep it up xxx

great poem i can really relate to this well done keep it up xxx

i like it so much! your a great writer!

Yet another great poem. You take your pain and put it into words. Awesome

great poem!!! you have lots of talent.. keep up your great work.. and keep your head up!! :)

Very well written and u do a good job expessing emotion! I am working on that! Amazing poem! 5/5 Take Care! Brooke

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Excellent! This was well written and well expressed. You did a great job here in describing the torment left from a lost love.

I like the positive end to this poem. We all can understand that life is hard, and it makes since to write about it, I just like how you had a bit of a light at the end of all the darkness, it takes a strong prospective on life and a talent for writing to make that work out well. Nice poem love.

-Tainted Mikochan

Very expressive peice,, the feelings were very clear. i like the positive feeling towards the end, the idea of hope that comes in, that is very well done.

5/5

Awesome poem!!!

Hey, This peom is written really well i like the style and how it flows... i also relate so much to it, its kinda scary how when i read your poems how similar my feelings are... i hope u continue to write, but i also hope you will feel happier one day. Thank you for sharing that poem