GREAT JOB!! I REALLY LOVED IT.. KEEP UP THE AWESOME WRITING!

WOW! Maybeth when you show your emotions in your poem they are just the best!! The flows of your poems shock me so much and I love your work..Keep on to that love and maybe you'll go somewhere with it..But a lost love means theres a better one on the way! Keep your head up!!
Love always,
~Chelsey~

Great poem. Honest emotion, love and pain leaped from everyword I read.

Wonderful flow from start to end.

Thank you for your comments, please check out my latest poem, thanks!

Kind regards
Hayley

Oh dalring beautifully written I have missed your writes so much!

that was a great poem, i loved it.
it's got so much of how you feel about
someone you really love.
thankyou

wow! beautiful poem. 5 for this, excellent job!

Wow... So Beautiful & So Much Meaning... I loved it Maybeth! Keep it up! Best of Luck to you:X God Bless You! *5/5*

**~**Sweet Angels Sedusha**~**

This is very good...I feel the same about this guy I've once gone out with...we wern't very good friends but now we're pretty close....and I really like him....he doesn't have a girlfriend but when I see him even flirting with another girl it cruhes my heart....Good job! I give it a *5*!!!

Love
Nickie