Comments : Thank You, my friends

  • 19 years ago

    by polly

    beautiful hunni. i loved it. i know a girl too,and what it is like every day, to try to fool those closest to us. if we smile, everyone else seems fine.feelings are caged like a bird as if they were one day freed i know much destruction they will cause. its not the right way maybe. i hope that you stay strong. as tears that we cry inside seem to burn our heart and numb our faces, and hurt much more when others dont see, or hear.
    it is a fantastic poem, and i loved it!
    was written beautifully.
    polly
    xxxxxx ;)