Comments : So What

  • 19 years ago

    by Erica Brown©

    "You got to go smoke up,
    Then make yourself intoxicated.
    So what if you did wrong things?
    I was the one who made my life right."

    I don't know.. it's a thought.
    Take care.

  • 19 years ago

    by Barbara Jean

    IT SAYS THAT IM THE BEST
    AFTER ALL THIS I NEED TO REST...
    ...I dont no..lol...
    what made you write this?

    SO THATS WHAT I HAVE TO SAY
    YOU CAN DO IT ANY WHICH WAY..

    dont ask... im high...lol..5

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    Its a good start to a good poem but thats it a start nothing really to cling too tell me more let me explore the differences between you and the person you are writing about and give me a summery of which you feel is the correct way to go. Good Start but thats it.