hey this is really good, shows how people need other people in their lifes i love it and i forgot to tell you earlier that you can use my poem "Silence" if you want i got no problem with that!

take care

~lil slam~

Hey this is a great poem! i really like it! awesome job!!

xX-Katherine-Xx

there is a bit of forced rhyming and so flow problems but other then that great job in a few minutes

I really enjoyed this poem, great job!! 5/5 all the way!