by Austin Jan 28, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
As of which this is complied |
by Bret Higgins
experimenting with stanza types could help with form but the flow is good and it reads well, fella. Nice, obviously heart felt work there. \4/ |
Good job, i loved it keep up the good work MuchLoveJJ |
i could feel loads of anger filled in the poem. The words were chosen wisely. I don't have much to criticise because it is written well. If you want to improve much more, try out some poetry forms like villanelle, triolet, sonnet..etc. It will be much more challenging. |
by Leah20
Very nice use of vocabulary. The poem flowed really well, no critism that I can offer here. Awesome job, keep it up! |