Very nice use of vocabulary. The poem flowed really well, no critism that I can offer here. Awesome job, keep it up!

i could feel loads of anger filled in the poem. The words were chosen wisely. I don't have much to criticise because it is written well. If you want to improve much more, try out some poetry forms like villanelle, triolet, sonnet..etc. It will be much more challenging.
Anyways keep up the good writing.
Trincy.

Good job, i loved it keep up the good work MuchLoveJJ

experimenting with stanza types could help with form but the flow is good and it reads well, fella. Nice, obviously heart felt work there. \4/

Bert