Hey, this is really good...i like the way itz set up...take care and keep on writing!!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

It was a really good poem. I liked it and to most of those I can say yes!! The only one I can't is putting the plan into action. But that could change, so anyways. Great poem and keep writing.

I've been high, well i am high, ive been drunk, abused and slit my wrist, the thing is the cutting only made matters worse, the drinking got me in trouble, and i dont get abused anymore cuz i learned how to swing back, and grandma dont like it when i swing, cuz i aim to kill when i swing. You have a horrible life, and all i can say is, tell someone about your dad, the law, i dont know how canada works, but here, child abouse is wrong and can get someone locked up for a long time. I cant say shit about you drinking, i love it, and i suggest if you get high, stick to pot.