wow this is AMAZING!! the last four lines are so powerful and the whole poem has a great flow to it, well done !
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there is something very beautiful abt this poem...i liked it a lot....the flow was excellent....keep writing...take care...FIVE>>>

Omg...:-O!!! This poem flowed so great sis!! I mean I can not think of a word to describe this poem and the way I felt about it..I mean it has to be one of my favorites..I agree with thundersRose that line she pointed out was amazing! The chose of words was great Eirisa..You are so talented I can't complain about one peice I read!! You continue to shock me with everything you write..Keep your head up and everything will be fine!!
love always,
~Chelsey~

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Wow! Did you write this poem about my life? :) I could so relate to this. It was awesome.

AWSOME! yay cuz its a very well writen poem and i fully relate

Loved it! keep up the good work
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II LIK DIS POEM TO0H IT MAKES ME CRY.. WEN II DINK BOUT LOVE IT HURTS SO0 MUCH BECASUE WID ALL DA LOVE BRIGNS ALL THOSE HEARTBREAKIN MEMERIES.. =\ BUT YEAH WELLS YEAH BYE