Well first I would like to say yes!!! Finally you posted! I have been waiting on the edge of my seat girl to read your writing!!!

This poem was amazing Eirisa!! Something i wasn't ready to read..Yet you make such valid points..Every realtionship needs commitment ANd I know how it must suck that you don't get that..Its only a matter of time and I'm sure you'll get what you want...Another thing..The way you ended this poem was awsome!! That last line was just like...WHOA! Loved the title and the whole poem itself!!!
Always of fan of you Eirisa!
your lil sis,
~Chelsey~

hey pretty good i like it... its alot longer from which i usually read so i like it lol a challenge! hehe its great very creative and really well written! 5/5!!!!!!