Amazing! love the way to be the one is repeated makes it seem a stronger point of view, well done darl xxx

good poem flows very nicely keep it up

very good....but the ending doesn't flow with the rest of the poem....
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

Wow nice poem and thank you for the comment ... keep up the work ...

GREAT work bbez
xx
~Broken Inside~

great poem!! i noticed that u rated mine so i decided to rate n comment urs...thats a really good one, i wish i could write good like that, but i havent writtin in a while GREAT JOB WOMAN!

its a well good poem huni. its really cool :) xxxxxx

Love ya poem and i can guess hu it is bout!! LOL!

hey, nice poem, where bouts in essex u from?

Short, simple, NICE!!.. i really like it
by the way..thanx for commenting on my poem

hey, sorry i ddnt get back to you sooner, Im from Harlow, dont no whether you know it thanks for the comment too xx

very good 5/5

really like this! good work babes! xxx

Just be whatever fate set us to...

Nice poem...girl...and thanks for your comments...5/5...