Amazingly well put, i liked how you put the fact that "no one cares if you die, only the closest of kin" type deal, i love that and it is really a great poem.
Five/Five
P.S. I know not all girls are like that...only the ones i meet hehe...sad but true. Well if you keep commenting on my poems then i will add you to my favorites, sorry it took so long to get back to you, i am trying to comment back to everyone who commented on my poems in the past few days.
loved your quote
The one who makes you cry isn't worth your tears. The one who is worth your tears would never make you cry." AMAZING!!!!!!!