Let Me Love You

by Kaitlin Kristina   Jan 28, 2005


Sitting with you,
We are alone,
Staring out the window,
At the rain and the cold.
My head on your lap,
Your fingertips shift through my hair,
And although we are silent,
Your comfort is there.

I don’t feel so alone,
I don’t feel so scared,
You support me by your presence,
And this feeling we share.
Just le me feel loved,
Let me love you back,
I collapse into your arms,
And you pick up my slack.

I don’t have to fight you,
I don’t have to resist,
I’m letting you love me,
Like you always persist.
To you I surrender,
And I let you take care,
Of all my troubles,
Which don’t need to be there.

I’m the weak one,
I’m the one,
Who cant live without you,
My heart you have won.
And it will always be yours,
Until death do us part,
I now no longer own my heart.
You’ll keep it forever,
And you’ll never leave,
You always pick me up off of my knees.

You dry my tears,
With your tender kiss,
And I am not worthy,
Of a love like this.
You keep me sheltered,
Keep me safe,
And this sweet, long silence,
I hate to break.

You don’t even need to talk,
And I feel totally secure,
So as I lay on your lap,
Diffident and demure,
I have all your attention,
Although we don’t speak,
That’s the only comfort Ill ever seek.
“Let me love you,” Is what you say,
And I promise I will, forever to stay.

Dedicated to my boyfriend, who I love too much for my own good.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Kaitlin Kristina

    Angelina-

    I think that you should post this on the "love" forum to see what other people think too, however you should let him know that this makes YOU feel bad and maybe even talk to the other girl and let her know what the situation is. Maybe he is just playing both of you? You have to talk it out with him and ask him why its ok to hurt YOU and not this other girl.

  • 19 years ago

    by Bizarre

    d@mn, u write soooo good!

  • 19 years ago

    by Lostraindrops

    aww keep up the work <33

  • 19 years ago

    by Kaitlin Kristina

    I dont remember, it was a few days ago. It simply had a bunch of numbers with questions and then people filled it out with the poets who they thought answered them. The question was "Most improved poet," and someone answered "Aaron," so I thought of you and wanted to see for myself. He was right, whoever he was. Thanks for the compliment

  • 19 years ago

    by Knight_of_Blackrose

    That was a very sweet dedication. Thank you very much for the compliment, it mean so much to me... just out of curiosity, where did you find this topic of discussion? I looked and couldn't seem to locate it.
    Great work!
    Aaron

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