Why is everyone ruining the endings with poor english?...

The poem as a whole is ... meh. It's not bad, it's not great. I do, however, see great potential...

Hon this one started out real good

Wow i love your work - i truly do. Your talent and structure of the poetry you write really amazes me. I'll read your new poems as they come along now. Much love from me :) p.s don't take that wrong! lol

Wow. This was really deep...Had great emotion and it was very moving. You have great potential in your writings. I can see you are very talented. xxx

very deep and emotional. but i must say the ending threw me off a bit. other than that its a well written poem.

very wonderful and it has such meaning to it as well.. so wow! and excellent!

Fantastic poem, really loved it totally no flaws xxx alex xxx

Beautiful way withwords :) Love it