eh wow, that was so beautiful written , defenant 5!! God Bless
Love Heather.

Thank you dear for what u've said,that was really nice of you,and i appreciate it ,n ur the first to comment on my poems..am excited : ) Bless ya too

I liked the way you made the poem about a candle and it was a good thing. It was a wonderful way to put things. An old philosophy saying was "life is like a flame, flickering at times and too short for the rest"

The answer to the poem is darkness inside me. Thank you so much for the comments....she cheated on me and i will never go back to her, i am working on this really nice girl i asked her out ot the movies and she accepted. It would be great if it turned into more then just a date...hoping maybe a long term relationship.

I asked her one thing when we started our realtionship.

well two

1) don't cheat on me
2) if you do tell me..don't hide it.

She never lived up to either of them.

Well i have rambled on, i hope that you get as much satisfaction out of this response and it was the one you were looking for.

...haha

P.S. Five/Five on the poem

~Nice poem. Candle is a good example, you picked for your poem.
~take care, 5! always believe in love, amit ♥

that is a very interesting poem but i liked it a lot good job.

Encouraging and inspirational!
Beautifully written. Keep on writing!

Kurt

WOW, that poem is amazing! Its really great. I love your writing style...That poem is beautiful!
Love Julie
XOXOX
take care

Thanks Sweet Juile , am Really thankful that you cared to read this Poem,Nice of you

Always Take care
Peace

Rua Francis

This is really, really quite good. I hate the way my poems all end up being rigid to a set form, and often too balanced...yours are much more free.

Thanks mates : )

thanks for your comments. this was sweet. i'm not sure i understand all of it but i can relate to being alone.

Hey Sinister,no needs to thank me about commenting ...! : ) Good poems need attention.

once again beautiful..5/5 you are really good..i hope you continue to write..

much love
shannon

Oh Dephe no needs to thank me : )