Im lost

by Rachele   Jan 29, 2005


I'm lost in a world of sadness
I'm lost in a world of lies
I'm lost in a world of depression
I'm lost in a world of crys
I'm lost in a world of reality
I'm lost in a world i don't know
I'm lost in a world of evil
is there another way to go?
for I'm lost in a world of hate
yet i still find love
the love of my friends and family
i guess I'm not that lost
but love doesn't stop the pain
i feel each and every day
love just helps me along
it helps me to put the knife away
for if i left for heaven
I'm sure I would be missed
by all my friends and family
as they insist
that they love me each and every day
thats something i will never give away

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  • 19 years ago

    by -Jay-

    Wow! i loved it! Great writing, it really turned around in the end and i love that! well done :D I know how you feel, and i'm always here if ya need nething.

    XxX -n thanx for commenting on mine-

  • 19 years ago

    by pinkytoria

    i could really relate to this. it was ace keep up the fantastic work

  • 19 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    "love doesn't stop the pain"
    This true (sometimes) ...

    "i feel each and every day
    love just helps me along
    it helps me to put the knife away
    for if i left for heaven
    I'm sure I would be missed
    by all my friends and family
    as they insist
    that they love me each and every day
    thats something i will never give away"\
    Wow... Now that^^ was a lot of meaning that I really loved about the poem! I can relate to this poem! Keep it up! God Bless Your Heart & Always Keep Your Head Up!!!
    **I added you to my fav. list :) Keep on writing**

    *!*Sedusha*!*