this is weird but still very good i wouldn't be able to write one like this so great job!

~lil slam~

Wow, this is a simply entrancing poem :) The metaphors were used quite effectively to portray a sorrowful feeling... ... well, I hope this isn't reality...

Uhh..YEAH IT IS FANTASTIC! Lol..Great one..

Chris..

its so very different which makes it so much better...great work!
Love Heather.