Even though you say its only free write it sounds like a poem. It's really good.

thanx a lot i really appreciate your comment

wait itz u tiffany the tiffany that goes to school wit me , U sound gay lol so proper............... u fooled me lol!!!

tiffany i havent read it ye imm a read it now and tell u what i think okkkay?

omg tiffany itz good lol ican FREEWRITE!!! but when i try to write a poemz it suckz like a** !!! that sux! lol

Reenie why u write comments to yourself (i seriously need new friends...)

the free write was really good keep it up