aww i am so very sorry about the loss of your friend, may he lie peacefully in God's hands. such a beautiful ending, however, i think you could have went more into it but you do get a 5 just because of the beauty it holds. God Bless You

Love Heather

thanks for the honest critique!!

So sad.. sorry for your loss, I love the poem, keep up the great work xxx

thankyou i really appreciate it