this is such a sad story and yet I LUV IT!!!!! THIS IS SOOO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN KEEP IT UP UR SOOOO GOOD

~ROCK ON~

i love this poem its very sad but great i have it a 5

omg did u really wirte that its so fuking good sammi

Nice work hun!!! Well written, itz sad tho!!
I LuV AFI too lolz, n Saving Francesca is also a mad book...
Email me if ya eva wana talk!!
Luv ya sweetie

This is very good...you do a great job writing keep up the good work! I give it a *5*!

Love
Nickie

wow is all I can say that was so good! A very sad poem but the best I have read all day! U have talent!

sammi
oh my god this poem is beautiful, i literally cried in it :(
oh my god aww so sad
simi xoxo

Omg...this poem is so sad...you are great at writing keep it up~ i really like the was you explaind the facts great job..thanks for commenting on my poems ...
take care

x sparks x

Hey! Wow, this is an aweosme poem! It was kinda long but I couldn't stop reading! Aweosme poem! It's a 5/5 for sure! Keep writing . . .
*Lisa*

Wow this was really long but such a sad poetic story.. I just love it.