hey everyone that read my poem/lyric. i know that it is not finished. but its so hard for me to finish it cause i don't know what else to say i just can't stop crying when i try to write the 3rd Verse. but just give me some time and i will finish up my poem/lyric.

but you can still comment on it if you like.

thank you.

>chanelle kirk aka shawty

Ok so im leaving another comment... i cant believe it's been 3 yrs since i wrote this almost 4 yrs actually... but i realize it's no were near finished... i been working with music and this lyric doesnt even have 16's (16 lines in a verse) and i think the chorus is long enough but chea i will get back to t his poem/lyric when i can... i know it's been almost 4 yrs but i dont re-read what i have posted up on here so sorry