My hero, My Savior

by SmileeItsBritt   Jan 30, 2005


Theres this girl I know
I haven't known her very long
But I would be so lost and confused
If she were ever to be gone

She brings a smile to my face
She wipes the tears from my eyes
She's always by my side
Waiting to hug me when I cry

I look up to her in so many ways
She's great in everything she does
I swear she is a gift from god
The greastest sent from above

Someday I want to shine like her
To have someone look up to me
In any of the ways I see in her
I wish that half as good as her I'd be

This girl she is my hero
She's my big sister its true
Whenever I'm around her
I learn something new

I know I can trust her
Through my every endevor
Shes my big sister, the best
Always and FOREVER

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  • 19 years ago

    by **Just Her**

    this was very well written. the only part that confused me was "i havent known her long"... shes your sister? lol.. buti think i understand that maybe you havent been very close with her for long. whichever way i can relate friendship wise. i think this is so sweet that you wrote this about ur sister. good write.
    keep on smiling

  • 19 years ago

    by D..

    Great, done with real feeling , its great to have someone like her around.
    Doreen 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Rashelle

    This is amazingly sweet.Iloved it :)

  • 19 years ago

    by *~*Soldier Lover*~*

    this is incredibly sweet! I hope you really do have someone like this in your life!! 5/5
    *~*Soldier Lover*~*

  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    aww thats really cute!!

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