I thought that was just a great poem and so true too...ugh..i feel so broken right now...well great poem and keep it up...keep on smiling

*XoX much love,Sw33ti3*

excellent poem keep writin

Beautifully writen. i really like it.. I give it a *5/5*
Great job...Keep it up!!

i love it. beautifully written. I can really relate.. its like, you will help anyone, but no one can help you..once again, great job
-K

:)Well Done Heather! ... Wonderful Work As Always!... Keep em coming=D

(-Sedusha-)

that is really really really good!

This is a very strong poem. I've definitely been there before. I didn't think the ending was weak, the last stanza tied the whole thing together! Superbly written~Holly