by Lauraballz
Really gud poem, I know how you feel and it's always gud to see a Poem you can relate to. Well done. |
i love this poem it is just like me and Devin ( the guy in my poem) but he dose not have a gf well i love this poem great job.... |
OMG....me too....that totally fits my feelings....great job!!! |
That was sooooo good. My friends going through the same thing right now. Nicely written! (",) |
by Mandi
This one is really good really touching...really true...people never know what they have until they can't have it unfotunately this is a great one keep up the good work! |
by Barbara
Very nice poem |
by Rebecca
I know how you feel girl! It sucks huh? |
by dandy
*Nods* Yes, this is quiet the sour pickle to be in. It hurts when the guy you like has a girlfriend or likes someone else. Some guys are blind, and it sucks, but for now you've just got to either hope he notices, or move on. Try not to scrutinize the situation in your mind. If the times comes, he'll love you. If not, then it wasn't meant to be. You're here for a reason. That reason just may not be him. Really great poem, I enjoyed this one a lot. Thanks so much for commenting on my poem as well. I love to get feedback on my writing. Good luck and keep writing! |
5/5 Great Job!... if you have time, read my poem, "my friend, my love..." |
by kathleen
I like this. |
by Viraaa
Great poem! it is sooo me. x) |
by Jo Anna EL
I can relate so much.Im going through the same thing.It's hurts cauese we admitted to eachother it felt like we were dating for a while.Then that ghurl asked him out and his friend monique forced him to say yes..And what's worse is we still talk like nothings happened.I still have feelings for him and i can tell he really doesen't like her at all.if you ever ghet the chance try talking to me i can tell we could share feelings.. |