N then you went

by R F   Jan 30, 2005


We were babies
we were fine

we were sisters
you were mine

we used to fight
it was alright

we used to pray
pray every night

n then you went
from out of my sight

left me alone
during those empty nights

Oh ...nothing would replace
replace you right.

Copyright ©2005 Rua Francis

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    ~Nice poem once again, this one wasn't too emotional. Good job. Keep writing.
    ~take care, 5! always believe in love, amit ♥

  • 19 years ago

    by Unloved ♥

    if u want also check out my poem "Come Back DOwn" its about death also..thanks

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    oh right.

    Thank you for always commenting on my poems, it means a lot to me to have someone who is commenting on them.

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Good poem and a deep meaning. I am guessing from your english that you are french, not saying it is a bad thing. I just notice suttle little grammer things.

    All in all i liked the poem..it was a good poem about an unfortunate subject.

    Five/Five

  • 19 years ago

    by Unloved ♥

    oh I'm very sorry, if you want you can read my poem "There No Beauty in Sorrow" its kinda bout losing someone you really love...take care..

    Unloved ♥