I wrote that poem for my sister,the one i lost 10 years ago : ( i stil miss her n want her back,its my lost wish !

oh I'm very sorry, if you want you can read my poem "There No Beauty in Sorrow" its kinda bout losing someone you really love...take care..

Unloved ♥

Good poem and a deep meaning. I am guessing from your english that you are french, not saying it is a bad thing. I just notice suttle little grammer things.

All in all i liked the poem..it was a good poem about an unfortunate subject.

Five/Five

oh right.

Thank you for always commenting on my poems, it means a lot to me to have someone who is commenting on them.

if u want also check out my poem "Come Back DOwn" its about death also..thanks

~Nice poem once again, this one wasn't too emotional. Good job. Keep writing.
~take care, 5! always believe in love, amit ♥