woderfull!! luuuved it!! filled with emotionz..and may all ur wishes come true!!
bye

Elise-
This is great. It has so much emotion in it and your rhyming doesn't seem to be too forced. One of my favourites of yours.
Keep up the good work (lol),
Your faithful twitcher,
xoxZoexox

its great. and the last line.. lucky guy to have you want him soo much. i know what its like wanting someone you can have.. it sucks. goood poem, keep it up. the ones from the heart are the best

this is a great poem! i am giving u 5! u write very well. keep them coming :)

wow, i really love this...I feel the same way you do...i tend to help a lot of teens with problems and i finding myself praying for the strength to do this...Amazing poem *5

God bless
Love Heather.

Hey
I like your poems too.
your really good at them and thank you for puting me in your favs. no one would ever do that with my stuff. anyway keep writing too.
from jayne

your poems are really good and you just keep writing!