Comments : Sands of time

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Awesome poem hun...loved it...well written..flowed well, good rhymes and diction..you're so awesome at it <33 xxx

    i love you so much, and i wish i could take the memories and the pain from your past and present and future and just banish it forever..i love you so much <33 xxxxx i miss you

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 19 years ago

    by Elise

    hum...very powerful...I like this one a lot ! Look ! it's a twitcher ! (sry about that just HAVE to say it)
    Take care,
    E.