This was some good writing, it is really good stuff, its true, love sucks, but its when u find that one person u really love and the one who truely loves you back when it all was worth while, so keep ur chin up and keep writing! i gave it a 5!

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this was ok the message was good but it seemed you lacked having it read smoothly. I liked it but the choppiness left it hard to understand maybe I am being too critical. well good try anyways

great poem again amy some of your other work is a bit better but still i loved it keep it up you have real talent

james xoxoxoxoxox

Hey I really like this one, it's so true. YOu are a really good writer!!!

this is good! keep up the good work! Always believe in love and trust in God!
and thanks for commeting on my poem and if u have time check out some more.
-Britt

I liked it. I can relate to this poem. People are always lying about how they love u and how much they care and when they need u u are always there but when u need them they're no where near! Thats y u should only trust and love yourself.

This one is really deep. In my case *cough*Zach*cough*.