yeah, it would be better if it rhymed but for a non rhyming poem, you did a great job expressing feelings...i know how it feels...an everyday thing for me too...be strong for ur friend!! God bless

Love Heather.

its nice to know how much someone can care. great poem!

Aww thats so sweet of you to think of your friend like that! This was a very good poem, I liked it. Keep it up!

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I loved it! once again another good job! I wish I had ur talent! Keep it up ur great at this!