This was truly beautiful and I can relate to it my best friend was about 14 when he was hit by a drunk driver although your poem is different than my situation it still makes me think.. anyway awesome job:) 5

True or not within your personal life, quite pertinent regrettably to many people's lives. And may you raise considerable amounts of money for your most worthy cause!

that's very sad how horrible accidents like this can occur. excellent poem!

Woah Welcome Back.

Very nice.

Delectible.

5/5

wow, i think my mom is with the Mother's Against Drunk Driving (MADD) she gets things in the mail from MADD all the time <3333 keep up the work

Good message but very simplistic. I've seen lots of poems like this, and it didn't seem to be particularily strong.

Hey, I really love the poem, my aunty was killed by a drunk driver, I can really relate to it, excellent work xxx

wow...so powerful and sad. amazing! *5* u have incredible talent!!!! can't wait to read more :)
Ariane
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It's hard for some people to write about things that haven't happened to them and still seem emotional with it you pulled it off. Excellent job. >3jess