Thats awesome.
loved it
take care
ellie

wow excellent poem, I loved how you expressed yourself....thank you for commenting on my poem, it means so much to me.......ttyl

Kalika

That was brilliant and as everyone says well expressed! Keep it up and thanks so much for your comment it meant so much:)
Tash
XOXO

you put such feeling into your poems, and i'm usually put off by poems that dont have a rhyming scheme but i really love your poetry. fantastic job! :)

omg what an awsome poem! once again i love your work this is so full of feeling/emotion and very creative i loved it your soooooooooooo talented thank you so much for that poem it was fantastic! >>5/5<<
bec xXx

its real good real deep i gess the word is. the middle section is definetly the best part i think and i think i liked this bit best...
"you hear my words but don't listen you look at my wounds but dont see
you turn the shame that i hide the blackened darkness left to lie to hope that you might find".
take care, you have talent and potential to be even better than u already are, dont stop till u get enough lol.
anyways take care,
ellie
xoxox

Very good poem..keep it up!, 5/5 for you.
Please check out my poems, it would mean a lot to me.
Take Care

Hey this was really good...i can relate a lot to it great job keep writing

amazing write, you have a great talent. the line

you hear my words but don't listen you look at my wounds but dont see

really stood out to me, so brilliantly put. keep it up and stay strong always, lu -x-x-x-

wow this is so good! i reeeeeeli liked this! keep it up coz ill be reading all ur poems! ur definatly added to my favs! xxxxxxxxx

omg ur so talented!! great work mwAzzz XOXxoxXx

Well Done...great imagery...don't give up