This poem is dedicated to someone special but does not know my true feelings for her. i hope that she will someday see.

wow.... that was so deep. so sweet. i really enjoyed this poem. im sure she loves it too... if she knows about it anyway. great job. i wish a guy would write like that bout me... wow, that was amazing.

thats a beautiful poem...its very well written and has nice form and rhyme..good use of details and imagery!

This was beautiful poem! I loved it! So Loving & Passionate! Excellent Work! God Bless! *5/5*

*~*Sedusha*~*
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hey!
whats up? Hope everything is good with you, i'm in school right now so the computers won't let me e-mail you... I was going to though. This is a nice poem, who is it about? You need to tell me about this girl!! lol. Hope your doing well, I really hope to hear from you soon! ttul, keep on writing!! I love this poem!
much love,
-Mols

Hey Bobby,
I loved the poemand I hope you aren't to busy. Becuase htis web site is nothing with out your awesome peoms. Keep it up!
~~Brat

omg this poem is amazing i know exactly how you feel that is like so sweet and just amazing lol it is soo hard to love someone thatmuch and not be able to tell them i hope everyhing works out

oh yea and thanxe for commenting on my poem

☼Becky☼

This is really good ! keep it up!

This is really good ! keep it up!