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by Priscilla Jan 31, 2005 category : Sadness, depression / other
You made me a promise that you said would stay But where is it now? It's gone away That promise ment alot to me It would always be in my heart But then you broke that promise And everything fell apart! I should of listen to my doubts I should of known you lied But now my heart's split into As I start to cry. I wanted the promise to last forever but it didnt last long And after you broke that promise Everything felt all wrong!! -please vote/comment
by Cassie
glad you suggested checking out your poems... i like them a lot; i really appreciated the comment i got on my poem... feel free to check out any more of them you like:)
by Shelby G.
awww this is soo sweet, and sad. a 5/5 for sure!