Falling

by Tiffany   Jan 31, 2005


Falling into darkness,
with no regret.
She has no reason to live.
No one cares for her,
no one loves her,
no one knows she exists.
So she keeps falling.
Slipping away,
until no one can find her
Nobody hears her
silent screams,
as she takes in
her last breath.
She's gone,
disconnected from the world,
when suddenly,
her body feel a jolt,
and her heart begins
to beat once more.
Her eyes open,
and the room is clear.
It felt more like a dream,
but it was to real.
Her mother hugs her
and says she's glad,
she's still alive.
Even though she lived,
she longs for the
feeling of falling
once more.

Please comment and rate. I'd really appreciate the input.

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  • 19 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    For some strange reason, this reminds me of that song 'the freshmen' by verve pipe. Love that song, love your poem. Awesome.

  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor

    great poem! i love it! really this is so great and beautiful! the story is so creative! keep it up!

    Love, Taylor

  • 19 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Your so stupid. I'm slappin you when i see you.

  • 19 years ago

    by ReenIe

    well tiffany u said comment and this is ur dumb/ crazy freind u go to school wit (shareen aka Reenie) and i am commenting wow i liked it kewl this was a five to me so u got a five well u already kno what i think cuz we talked about it b4 i just feel like typing so blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah

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