well tiffany u said comment and this is ur dumb/ crazy freind u go to school wit (shareen aka Reenie) and i am commenting wow i liked it kewl this was a five to me so u got a five well u already kno what i think cuz we talked about it b4 i just feel like typing so blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah

Your so stupid. I'm slappin you when i see you.

great poem! i love it! really this is so great and beautiful! the story is so creative! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

For some strange reason, this reminds me of that song 'the freshmen' by verve pipe. Love that song, love your poem. Awesome.