Short but good, I've checked out some of your other poems and you have talent! I can really relate to this one though, keep up the good work xxx

I liked the concept of this poem very much. I loved the ending four lines. It had the strength i was talking about in the other comments i've made on your work. I knew you could do it.
Only problem on the 7th line you have a grammar error. It should be "Too high to stay alive"
Thanks for sharing. Keep writing, keep improving.