One last cut

by ~*LaRiSsA & eRiN*~   Jan 31, 2005


Cut, Slice, Rip, Tear/
Just one more cut/
No1 will care/

The silver blade scrapes against my bone/
The demons get to you when your always alone/

They always talk to you inside your head/
They tell you everything that is bad/
So it makes you wish you were dead/

You try to ignore them/
Block them out/
But they will get back in/
To that there is no doubt/

The demons all they want is for you to be dead/
They tell you that your nobody/
So then suicide is always locked up in your head/

The gun is too powerful/
The pills are too slow/
So a slit on my wrist/
Is how I think I'll go/

Too all you Bastards who hate me/
And called me names/
I just wanted to say Screw You/
And I'll see you in your dreams/

To the ones I loved/
I'm sorry I did this/
I'm sorry about the lies/
And the broken promises/

One last cut to finish my story/
I didn't committee suicide/
It was the demons who killed me.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Cherry

    I understand how you feel but Theres no need to cause pain to yourself. My mother was in your shoes not to long ago. She slit her wrists, hung herself 3 times and tried to gas herself in a car. If she would have died my life would have been over to. You have alot of things in your life that make you feel good, you just have to find them. I mean your really good at writting poems so roll with it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Autumn

    wow, your great, i couldnt find anyone who could relate to me like you can. Cuts on my wrist never amount to the pain i have inside, and all the cuts for poeple who never cared. Thanks for writing this.

  • 19 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey, this is really good...and i can relate to it...but dont do it hun...therez ppl out there who need u...and exactly..screw those ppl who called u names...u deserve a whole lot more than that...keep on writing, and take care...u got lotz of talent!!
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

  • 19 years ago

    by strawberrykiwi

    really good : ) i can relate somewut..i like ur attitude...if people hurt u..screw them