Sun Tanning

by Jacki   Jan 31, 2005


Once Strong and proud it stood like
a mountain, beautiful and serene.
But below its ground a nearing death.
A perfect snow falls last breath.
The hem of the seas wide mouth,
devouring and indulging with screaming
bright lights.
Flowers on Fire painted beautifully
upon its changing ways
destined for downfall, a daily rebirth.
The Spine of the world, drifting away....

this poem is a riddle

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    very kewl... and I have no idea what the answer to that riddle could be. But i like it anway

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    i guess nobody can understand the riddle............because nobody has said what they think the riddle is.

  • 19 years ago

    by HJ

    Fantastic work, very thought provoking. I loved your diction and flow. Great job, look forward to reading more!

    Check out my two recent poems, interested in your opinion, thanks!

    kind regards
    Hayley

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