omg this is sooo good ur are an awsome righter keep it up
ROCK ON

That was extremely touching. And I particularly thought these stanzas were beautiful and uniquely worded:

The sun didn't give her light
The moon failed to gain her sight
No natural beauties existed in her world
Everything was dark, lost, or sold

Her waterfalls were barren
Her gardens dead and frozen
Her rivers ran dry
No water flowed, not even from her eyes

Very nice!

I love how you wrote this, absolutly beautiful.
The hidden meaning and defined art written behind every symbol was thought twords a worthy and heart felt rememberance while creating an emotional yet lovely atmosphere.
I absolutly love your imageries and the way you portrayed the, I could even relate to a few,
"No water flowed, not even from her eyes"
I can definetly relate to that. My favorite lines however were,
"Anabelle knew there was more for her to see
She open her door to destiny"
and
"Hope was that little town
Anabelle was that young girl, who was never found"
First off those were absolutly beatiful. Second, I love the comparisons and relations you made with those symbols to towns, roads, and doors. It really created a realm of understanding and beauty.
Excellent job

I'm glad you all liked it. This isn't a real girl, but rather what I imagine that Anabelle to be. Thanx for all the great comments!!

§The Only Rose In This Desert§

I'm glad you all liked it. This isn't a real girl, but rather what I imagine that Anabelle to be. Thanx for all the great comments!!

§The Only Rose In This Desert§

Wow, that was such a great write! I truely truely loved this poem. Great job hun. >3jess