that was reallly good! Know how you feel, sometimes love turns us in the wrong direction, but then again, love is not explainable. Its lyke a feeling that u never want to loose, but sometimes, like u stated, it crumbles beneath u. keep writing
Love Always
~Lia Jnell

thank you guys for taking the time to comment on my poems- it really means a lot to me!
**jolene**

I hope that u love me as much if not more

sweet but sad! I liked it keep up the good work :)