Jealousy

by Elise   Feb 1, 2005


Anger
Fears
Suspicion
Tears
Madness
Darkness
Slowly takes
My heart.

Crying
Fearing
Lying
Yelling
Running
Alone
And slowly
Dying.

Help me
I’m
Hopelessly
Drowning
And inside
Fearing
Something
Bad.

What
Is this
What is it
Called
Are these symptoms
Of
Jealousy ?

***Im not sure about the category...but whatever...I tried a new style of writing...tell me what you think ! thx***

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  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    I liked it and I like the style, I like the way you describe your emotions xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    i like the style. great poem! always good to try something new.

  • 19 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    its great, but you have nothing to be jealous of, oh, and by the way, LOOK OUT BEHIND YOU. just though you would like to know

  • 19 years ago

    by !*!Zoe!*!

    I tried a new style of writing too! We're like trying new things sisters!!!!!!! lol Anyway, about the poem, I like it. It's not as good as your last one though...
    Your faithful twitcher,
    Zoe
    P.s. I'M AWESOME!

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