by Aken Sol Feb 2, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
"Paper thin candies strewn on the floor. |
by Robert
The use of words was great I really enjoyed every line but the whole picture was so hazy that I was wondering what you were trying to say. No focus is the only problem I see with your work I have alot of poems and I know every one of them have a message... |
I loved these lines: |
by Aken Sol
The format i used is called a "glosa". |