The format i used is called a "glosa".
The poem i quoted from Sean is... well, i'm not sure what it is at the moment but it's good one, :-P

Aken Sol

I loved these lines:
Guarding my entrance with eyes of wrath.
I back away from my reflection
And fade away from my imperfection.

Excellent write. You've got a unique style. >3jess

The use of words was great I really enjoyed every line but the whole picture was so hazy that I was wondering what you were trying to say. No focus is the only problem I see with your work I have alot of poems and I know every one of them have a message...