I don't know about this one I think it's alright not to bad but not great right?

hey this is pretty good, it's sweet to.
thanks 4 votin 4 my poem. i dunno wat my m8 was on den but i thought it was a crack up wen he wrote it cheerz again

awww nate this is so sweet and oh so sad too :( stop the sadness or i'll cry lol its really good though luv jenni xx

Such a sweet poem Nate, yours usually are. I love your writing, you're really good at it. Dont say it isnt great, 'cause it is.
And by the way, thank you so much for commenting on my poem, I really appreciate it :). Its good to hear the opinion of other people, I kind of need it right now too.. lol.
Much love,
Jaime

hey i fink i mite av commented on dis poem already lol but cheers 4 votin on my poem 2 lol dw it happens everywhere lol dont ya h8 it thou lol cheers again n all ur poems r mad lol
luv coddie

awww.. i liked this one too.. haha sounds like u have a lil crush there aye.. haha ciao..

this one was sweet!
keep it up with the great poems!

AWSOME! I felt like I was there