This is a really sad poem, i just hope that this peom does not represent your life experience now, and if it is, hang in there. By the way, its a great peom and all, but i don't think you've put you're peom in the right category, i think it's meant to go in dark peoms, or sad poems. If not, it doesn't matter, its a really good peom, keep it up.
Gurdy x (GoddessOfWings)